You've clearly improved a lot! But if you're not satisfied with this piece then may I suggest that it's because not all of her costume details are the same? Personally, in terms of design,I like the original design full of detail better than the redrawn version. Of course the redrawn version is amazingly better. You deserve a pat on the back. This clearly shows just how much you've improved. Though I'm not sure if you've changed her design or not, so please don't take offense to my opinion. Great job by the way.